IAM

[HipGnosis]

entering into a twilight state
love borders on love
the rush of peaceful understanding

neon arcs into silent swirls
dreamy creamy
manoeuvers of bliss in night's dark shroud

i love this feeling
Immortal Man wounded
amfortas' spear in the side

i'm mourning the world
through the loss of a loved one
helplessly split apart by blind chance

shivery sparks, cypher's complete
synaptic sins of physical entrapment
lie coiled in the base of the spine
locked in a box marked "IAM"

[kevin]

damn good stuff here friend.....i wish it went on for pages....keep writing, peace

[T.K. Pippin]

Whoa, don't even know where to begin.

[kevin]

this would make a great song friendo..........puts some music to it cause its excellent.
peace.

[Jenniewren Writer]

ah

just incredible

[Jennifer Surdam]

very good, there's a lot of visuality to it, you can see what is being described, that's how good it is. Keep up the good work, and definitely keep writing!
Hugs and BB,
jen :)